in blood in lust
on flesh on fire
an bone an ice
it’s thorns it’s desire
be love be life
my heart my soul
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Forever craving
ecstasies soulfully
tormenting me
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Hold on – Let go
O’ insidious dreams
cries passions inside
plaguing to be free
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inside a solitary cage
doves soar, skies cry
solace enters through keyholes
nostalgically reminisced
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Tarnished on remembrances
existence tries to forget
what once was tangible
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Lovers lost, never to be discovered again
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I love this. You seem to have invented a whole new form of poetry!
I like to experiment….the top vertical lines can be read left to right or up and down….did another one with just two vertical lines of prose about my grandfather’s passing a while back….Thanks for your kindness Geetha.
https://mvitrano.wordpress.com/2015/09/28/contemplating-loss-of-loved-one/
I realised that yes, which made me love it as I love experimenting too.
Am sorry for the grief caused by the passing of your grandpa but he surely is in a better place now.
I just checked out your poem. It really is something and reads upwards too as well as hopping from left to right in a given pattern. I love your creative addition to poetry and prose.
Thanks again for your kind words Geetha…I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂
Welcome. I just don’t have enough time with all the blogs I am following, my own writing, my work and my kids but otherwise would love to go and visit everyone’s blogs right from inception 🙂